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[Sean and Such Ep. 11]

Writing:
You've got some humorous ideas in here, and a couple really solid deliveries. But I can't help but feel that it the writing needs tightening up. Honestly, faster editing might suffice. It feels a little bit like you're evenly spacing each and every line reading. Pull those sound files closer together and shorten the movie.
Art:
The models are effective enough as placeholders, but you really need to get these characters moving. Especially when they're emoting. Extreme emotions call for extreme actions. Really SHOW these characters living their experiences. You can clearly draw well enough, so don't be afraid to draw more! Get those characters moving!
Overall:
3/5

SeanAndSuch responds:

Couldn't agree more... some times we just get lazy with some scenes. Thanks for your opinions and thoughts... we hope you continue to watch.

[Leo & Satan II]

Nice.

Very nice.

Oney responds:

haha thank you

[Dragons Are SO Halloween]

My favorite line. Is mine.

That's retarded. <3

nalem responds:

lol you gay <3

[Grand Theft Awesome]

Funnier than Awesomeraptor.

Seriously. Longer and better in every possible way. And I would know.

Oney responds:

WOOOOAH! the guy that made awesome raptor! ive watched it like 10 times! thanks man!

[Pirates 'n' Trolleys]

Get rid of that "music."

Animation was decent enough.
There's some comedy in there too, but I'd recommend removing the "music" from the segments. They make this flash really really noisy.
Other than that, this flash is a decent effort.

AdamJack responds:

I always struggle with making music. I'll work on it more in the future.